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Jag har några frågor angående hur man skriver manus.

Tex. i fightscener ska man då skriva:

"Peter slår ett hårt slag som träffar Nils i vänstra käkbenet. Nils kontrar med en spark som blockas av Peter." Osv osv.

Eller ska man skriva: "Efter en spännande kamp om liv och död...."

 

Och en annan sak. I ett tennismanus ska man då skriva att "Peter slår med backhanden mot motståndarens högra ruta osv." Eller kan man här skriva: "Peter vinner matchen utan större problem..."

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Jag har sett olika varianter. Vissa skriver väldigt detaljerat, andra skriver bara att det är en fajt och låter regissören och fightingkoordinatorn lösa det.

 

Här är ett exempel från Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon där striden inte beskrivs i någon vidare detalj:

 

%2$s skrev:

INT. STAR RESTAURANT - DAY

 

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GOU JUN SIHUNG

I'm Shining Phoenix Mountain Gou.

 

JEN

(furious)

Gou? I hate that name. It makes

me puke! Too bad you're named Gou.

You'll be the first to feel my

sword today.

 

Jen leaps up and dives into battle. The men all use

different kinds of weapons, but they all succumb to the

powerful Green Destiny.

 

MONK JING

Hold it! Don't you know Monk Jing?

 

Och här är ett exempel från Die Hard som är betydligt mer detaljerat:

 

%2$s skrev:

Suddenly Tony spins to the side and McClane FIRES, but the

big man's momentum slams McClane into a filing cabinet and sends

his pistol into the hall.

 

Tony fires his machine gun, but McClane kicks him into the desk.

 

He locks his arms around the big man's neck in a hold that

sends Tony reeling into the hall. McClane holds on as they

slam through several plastic board partitions. They careen

across the hall into the stairwell door, opening it, and crash

into:

 

85 STAIRWELL LANDING 85

 

then down the concrete steps into the wall on the landing below.

For a moment, both men lie still. McClane, still holding onto

Tony's neck, releases it and the man's head flops sickeningly

to the side.

 

For a moment McClane just looks at the dead man. Then, slowly,

methodically, he begins to SEARCH HIM. He turns all his pockets

inside out, looks at his clothing labels, stares long and very

hard at a California driver's license with Tony's picture on

it. He expertly examines the machine gun when a HISSING SOUND

coming from somewhere attracts his attention.

 

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