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Håller med monic1. Bra idé, gillar sån här berättarteknik, men den känns otroligt ogenomarbetad. Försök dessutom skriva in scenerna som man ska visa vad som hände. Dialogerna behöver filas på. Men försök bearbeta den lite mer.

 

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